Chủ đề crime thi ielts 2022
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Đề thi IELTS Writing Task 2 ngày 02/01/2022 có chủ đề về Crime. Đây là một chủ đề thường được cho trong IELTS Writing Task 2. Bài này DOL sẽ viết 1 sample IELTS Writing được 8.0 kèm với 1 số từ vựng và cấu trúc hay trong bài. Chúc các bạn học IELTS vui vẻ cùng dol.vn. DOL sẽ trình bày quan điểm qua 1 đoạn mở bài (introduction), 2 đoạn thân bài (body paragraph), và 1 đoạn kết bài (conclusion). Mở bài: Sau khi paraphrase lại đề bài, DOL sẽ đưa ra một Thesis Statement (luận điểm) để trình bày quan điểm của mình về vấn đề được đặt ra.
Kết bài: Cuối cùng, DOL sẽ nhấn mạnh lại quan điểm của mình là những người vi phạm pháp luật trẻ tuổi nên bị xét xử trước tòa khác với những người phạm tội ở tuổi trưởng thành. From my point of view, imposing similar punishments for both young and matured offenders will have a negative impact. Insert Paragraph Title Here... Equal treatments for underaged and adult lawbreakers More young criminals would emerge if they are pardoned for their wrongdoings due to their age. Giving young offenders lighter sentences is unjust for the victims and their families. Insert Paragraph Title Here... Juvenile delinquents should not receive retributions similar to that for adults Children do not have the moral capacity and thorough understanding of the world as grown-ups. Adolescents are easily affected by different factors, as compared to adults. Whether adolescents should be punished for their crimes in the way adults are has gained traction. From my point of view, imposing similar punishments for both young and will have a negative impact. On the one hand, advocates of equal treatments for underaged and adult have grounds to believe that this notion can have positive results. First, more young criminals would emerge if they are for their wrongdoings due to their age. Some are too light for the seriousness of the felonies committed, hence, cannot deter youngsters from breaking the law. Moreover, giving young offenders lighter sentences is unjust for the victims and their families, as some are too vile for punishments such as being sent to prison. One case in point is in Vietnam, 2017, a robber killed a family of 4, including the parents and their young children. Usually, this man would have been sentenced to death, yet he only got sentenced to 18 years in prison. The fact that he escaped just punishment because he was a few months underaged angered the public for an extended period of time. On the other hand, I strongly believe that should not receive retributions similar to that for adults. To start with, children do not have the and thorough understanding of the world as grown-ups. Therefore, they cannot fully comprehend the weight of their wrongdoings or even the sentences. Some young offenders commit crime without knowing that it is an offense. Thus, giving these criminals leeway and To conclude, while it is undeniable that is important to , I am of the opinion that young lawbreakers should be tried differently in court from adult offenders.Imposing similar punishments for both young and matured offenders will have a negative impact. He admitted to being a lawbreaker.  More young criminals would emerge if they are pardoned for their wrongdoings due to their age. Some retributions are too light for the seriousness of the felonies committed, hence, cannot deter youngsters from breaking the law. Some retributions are too light for the seriousness of the felonies committed, hence, cannot deter youngsters from breaking the law. to deter somebody from doing something /tuː dɪˈtɜː ˈsʌmbədi frɒm ˈdu(ː)ɪŋ ˈsʌmθɪŋ/ Some retributions are too light for the seriousness of the felonies committed, hence, cannot deter youngsters from breaking the law. I strongly believe that juvenile delinquents should not receive retributions similar to that for adults. Children do not have the moral capacity and thorough understanding of the world as grown-ups. an opportunity to rehabilitate /ən ˌɒpəˈtjuːnɪti tuː ˌriːəˈbɪlɪteɪt/ Giving these criminals leeway and an opportunity to rehabilitate and contribute to society is more humane. Grown-ups have the ability to stop themselves but younger ones, once instigated, may act on impulse and cause regrets.
to inflict fitting penalties for criminals /tuː ɪnˈflɪkt ˈfɪtɪŋ ˈpɛnltiz fɔː ˈkrɪmɪnlz/ While it is undeniable that inflicting fitting penalties for criminals is important to upholding society’s stability and values, I am of the opinion that young lawbreakers should be tried differently in court from adult offenders. to uphold society’s stability and values /tuː ʌpˈhəʊld səˈsaɪətiz stəˈbɪlɪti ænd ˈvæljuːz/ While it is undeniable that inflicting fitting penalties for criminals is important to upholding society’s stability and values, I am of the opinion that young lawbreakers should be tried differently in court from adult offenders. Mình cùng làm 2 bài tập sau đây để ôn lại các từ vựng và cấu trúc đã được dùng trong bài mẫu Writing IELTS nhé! 1 Trẻ em không có năng lực đạo đức và sự hiểu biết thấu đáo về thế giới như người trưởng thành. => Children do not have theand thorough understanding of the world as grown-ups. 2 Những người trưởng thành có khả năng suy ngẫm hành động của mình nhưng những người trẻ, một khi bị xúi giục, có thể hành động bốc đồng và gây ra những điều đáng tiếc. => Grown-ups have the ability to stop themselves but younger ones, once instigated, mayand cause regrets. 3 Tôi thực sự tin rằng những người chưa thành niên phạm tội sẽ không phải nhận những hình phạt tương tự như những người trưởng thành. => I strongly believe thatshould not receive retributions similar to that for adults. 4 Một sốquá nhẹ so với mức độ nghiêm trọng của các trọng tội đã phạm, do đó, không thể ngăn cản những người trẻ vi phạm pháp luật. => Some retributions are too light for the seriousness of the felonies committed, hence, cannot deter youngsters from breaking the law. Ngăn cản ai đó làm điều gì => to _________ somebody from doing something What is the synonym of "delinquent"? => an opportunity to ____________ Tới đây là hết rồi Nếu có thời gian thì nhớ làm phần bài tập và tự mình viết một bài khác nha vì 'Practice makes perfect' mà nhỉ |
